I felt terrible for leading her along. I knew it wasn’t right
but I needed to do it to save my family. I hope she notices me soon because I
am on a very tight schedule. I feel like there is always a very important date
that I will be late for. There I saw her notice me. “Good Alice, yes, follow
me, oh dear, please hurry up” I thought to myself. There for a minute I didn’t
think it was going to work but it did. She was behind me, on my trail. I ran
fast in a beeline because I can’t have anyone else but her see me. I went down the rabbit hole and hid in an
underground tunnel. I heard her asking where I was. I was breathing heavy but I
wasn’t about to expose myself to her. I saw her trip and fall into the rabbit
hole. This was all part of the plan that I had to help carry out.
I as well as some others had been drafted to help the red
queen. My special assignment was to bring the girl, name of Alice, to our world
and to the queen, who wanted to get to know who this girl was and her intent. I
knew that this wouldn’t be good. I knew that I was possibly leading this poor
girl to her death, but if I didn’t do it my family and I would suffer. How
could I do that to them? And if I had refused on the day I was drafted it
would’ve been “Off with his head!” in front of my family, so I went. I hope to
find some way out of this mess that is safe for everyone but I’m not sure I
will be able to in time.
I was in the forest, on my way to a tea party with the mad
hatter to discuss how to figure this all out when I heard her. She was too far
away to hear what she was saying but I knew it was Alice. I still couldn't let
her see me. I think she was calling out for me, but I’m not sure. I knew I had
to get out of there and fast. I made
sure she wasn't in the way I was headed and I bolted out of there. And to make
matters worse I was about to be late.
I finally got to the mad hatter and sat down. Man, was I out
of breath? I needed to lay off the sweet tea and go for unsweetened. I tried to
get his attention but he was talking to the mouse too much about unbirthdays and
how great they were. Did he know how much time he was wasting? I tried to get
his attention and found my efforts to be of no use so I decided I would call it
a day and talk to him tomorrow. And so off I went on my way home.
I love the line about laying off the sweet tea! Like your hare, I tell myself that every time I go out for my evening walk to exercise! : ) I like the idea you used here--revealing the thoughts of another character in a story. You could probably do that for all the characters in this particular tale.
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